Twinkling Starz

Good work, I see it really did pour out of you.

Nice, but I don't see any likeness of her. It is very realistic, I really like it. Very good work on the realism. -*Twinkles

Nice, not fabulous, but okay. I like the last stanza, it closed the poem up quite well. Some others come to the rescue and mend the broken glass until each ...

Em, his grammer and English is okay, I don't see anyhting wrong. Good work, zackrouda, the details are wonderful and I really like this poem. Keep up the good work!

Wow, this is a wonderful poem. I like the last stanza, great ending, I love it. You should put a rating on this, it warns people. Very good! The first ...

It's not absolutely wonderful, but nice. I like the fact that you mentioned many colors in the poem, it gave more detail. I really like the last stanza. Good ending. ...

Wonderful. Just plain wonderful.

I agree with Incandescence, I didn't feel any emotions or anything in the poem. I suggest you edit it and have more feeling, maybe make it longer. I don't like ...

I really like the snowman! It really looks like snow he's made out of, it looks soft.

Em, I don't really understand this very well. Em, good work, though.

I always hated that cold, dead doll, Good details, there. The one with the straight-through stare, The one who sat aloft and watched, The one who couldn't care. I like ...

They are all great! I like the first one, but can't think of the inspiration.. The second one is not too bad.. I love the third one! Very nice. The ...

Nice! I guess the other posters have said everything I wanted to say when I read this poem...

Love is...hmm, haven't found love yet. For family and friends, love is pure happiness.

Aaah! Now I see the second one. Good one, I like the dog in the second picture. The dragon is also quite nice. You are a talented artist!